Mom and I travel.

Title of composition: My mother took me to travel.

Keywords: Mom, 400 words in the fourth grade of Tourism Primary School

Words: 400 words composition

This article is suitable for: the fourth grade of primary school

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This composition is about 400 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is: "My mother took me to travel". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Once, my mother took me to Zhangjiajie for a trip. When my mother got home to prepare gifts and food, she went to a place to wait for my mother's friend. Later, her friend arrived, and we got on the bus. After a while, it was evening. Soon the car drove to the hotel. After eating, I sold something not far away and got on the bus at ten o'clock. I slept in the hotel for one night. The next morning, my mother and I went to Zhangjiajie to sell tickets and went to see the mountains in Zhangjiajie. My mother's friends saw that the mountains were full of mountains and fog. My mother's friend also said it was the same as a fairy mirror. It is also said that all kinds of people in that mountain went to the hotel at night and slept: they went back on the third day. The shadows there are beautiful. Teacher's comment: The article tells the story of my trip to Zhangjiajie with my mother and friends. The whole process was written in great detail, and every detail was written out. The teacher has two suggestions: first, the theme of the article is "Mom takes me to travel", so we should focus on the process of Zhangjiajie tourism and describe the beautiful scenery of Zhangjiajie, while this article focuses on the way to travel; Second, the sentences in the article are not fluent. The long sentences such as "My mother went to a place to wait for my mother's friend when she got home ready to salute and eat" and "After eating, I sold something not far away and sat in the car at 10 o'clock. I slept in the hotel for one night" are difficult to understand, and punctuation should be added in the middle.(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Lin Yaoji) 2009-5-27 23:04:00

Experience is all kinds of being urged and rejected, but I still love my mother very much.

Every time I travel with my mother, what I hear the most is my mother's all-weather urging. Obviously, I am away on holiday, but at my mother's insistence, I still have to get up at seven o'clock and leave at eight o'clock. It seems that I can't see the great mountains and rivers one minute later, which is even more urgent than going to work.

Because I am an organizer, I am responsible for packing my luggage whenever I go out, but this does not mean that I can have control over what to bring, which is up to my mother.

All kinds of clothes, all kinds of shoes, all kinds of toiletries and all kinds of food and drink, mom, you are simply going to pack the whole world into a suitcase and carry it with you! In fact, I have always thought that in today's economic globalization, most things can be bought at the destination, but mom obviously doesn't think so. Otherwise, why should I bring six or seven kinds of "food that can be eaten on the road"?

As mentioned earlier, my mother always loves to rush me, but sometimes it's not always the case, for example, when she wants to take a picture-and this happens every five minutes on average at the scenic spot.

In the past, when I went out alone, I always took more scenery than portraits, but once I went out with my mother, the "souvenir photos" I took for her everywhere were probably worth my self-portrait for a year. Whenever my mother says "take a picture of me", I have to be prepared to press the shutter to cramp my hand, because my mother will make countless moves in the same place and let me take countless pictures at countless angles and with countless scenes! Come on, mom, you're beautiful. You're in charge!

God knows how much my mother cares about the daily schedule, and I wish I could make a specific schedule and print it to her! And often she has just arrived at a destination, and before ten minutes of sightseeing, she is already asking me about the next stop. Mom, it's really easy for me to have the illusion that you're not interested here.